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mikelangelo
12-26-2005, 04:39 AM
Went hiking this weekend with my wife in Arizona. Took my camera and here is one of the shots I took. What do ya'll think? Any and all critique is welcomed.

http://www.mikelangelo.com/blog/index.php?showimage=345
eon
12-26-2005, 05:53 PM
The photo could use more depth. The rocks on the front and the mountains in the back are both sharp. When one was unsharp the photo wouldn't look so flat.

But I like the shapes of the rocks :D.
unseen
12-26-2005, 07:22 PM
i agree with eon. it's a very nice photo but could be better with a little more depth and maybe some more contrast. but it's a beautiful view!
mikelangelo
12-26-2005, 09:12 PM
Yeah... I was afraid of that. Thanks for the feedback!! I'll be posting more images for critique from our hikes this weekend.
SassKwatch
12-28-2005, 02:16 AM
I see nothing wrong with the depth, and there is VERY nice use of positive/negative space.

The one thing I do find distracting is the foliage in lower right corner. But I'm guessing you couldn't have got much closer and still captured the 'looking thru a keyhole' feeling.

And a minor opinion.....this one just screams out to be converted to B&W.
mikelangelo
12-28-2005, 01:23 PM
hmmm...B&W... I'll have to try that.

thanks for the feedback!!