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Old 10-20-2005, 05:43 PM
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Hi, I'm new to pixelpost and photoblogging. Just figured out how to work the templates, etc. Please check out my photoblog and comment and critique the photos. All comments welcome, good or bad. I feel that there is almost always room for improvement.

www.yeedesign.net/darkphoenix

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Old 10-21-2005, 02:38 AM
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typically we ask that you submit 3 of your favorites, to get better critique.
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Old 10-21-2005, 03:53 AM
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yeah, this area is more for specific photos you want crit on, to help you become a better photographer

its hard to just plow through a stack of images, and rather than comments on the blog we want the feedback to be here in to forum to learn from others mistakes and good things too
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Old 10-21-2005, 05:34 AM
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This happens weekly, and it's not anyones fault because people are new to the forum, can someone not sticky a thread with the topic letting people know to only post a couple of images?
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Old 10-21-2005, 06:41 AM
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there used to be, seems when the forum was updated it went missing, i didnt even notice

but even when it was there, no one read it...lol

i'll get it back up though
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Old 10-21-2005, 03:33 PM
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My apologies for posting my weblink. I'm new to this whole forum thing. Here are 3 pics to critique. Thanks again!

http://www.yeedesign.net/darkphoenix...p?showimage=12

http://www.yeedesign.net/darkphoenix...hp?showimage=4

http://www.yeedesign.net/darkphoenix...p?showimage=10
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Old 10-21-2005, 03:34 PM
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My apologies for posting my weblink. I'm new to this whole forum thing. Here are 3 pics to critique. Thanks again!

http://www.yeedesign.net/darkphoenix...p?showimage=12

http://www.yeedesign.net/darkphoenix...hp?showimage=4

http://www.yeedesign.net/darkphoenix...p?showimage=10
I Totally love that first one.
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Old 10-25-2005, 02:31 PM
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The dramatic lighting in the first two is good - particularly the second. It looks almost sinister.

The third picture isn't so great - suffering from camera shake. If you took it while out boating, there's little you can do about this as a tripod won't help.
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Old 10-25-2005, 03:01 PM
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First photo works well, the second one is great too except the yellow part of the sky seems a bit over cooked. The third, doesn't look like its taken by the same photographer it just seems a bit messy.

The first two are great though.
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Old 10-25-2005, 09:59 PM
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The first one lacks any sort of focal point for me. Technically it is fine - good lighting and focus, but it doesn't leave much of an impression otherwise.

I like the lighting of the 2nd one, though it seems like it is tilted slightly (minor quibble). Overall, I think #2 is the best.

#3 doesn't work for me - too much shake and not that interesting of a subject in the first place.
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