another n00b

[subneural]

another pixelpost n00b here. I'd appreciate any feedback on photos and the tweaks I make to joe[y]'s lightwhitetwo template:

www.subneural.com

TIA

[se.nsuo.us]

It would be easier for everyone if you gave a small list of tweaks you made

[Joe[y]+]

i like what you've done with the template - it's nice to see somebody actually making proper use of the menu for once - i'm glad it works fine!

[eon]

I like the scene of this photo http://www.subneural.com/index.php?showimage=5

The photo would be better and more exciting if you place the subject out of the middle. (Is this sence correct English??)
More information about this read about the Golden ratio

[jkn]

I have to agree with eon... "hope" is a really nice shot - nice warmth for a desolate scene, but it would be a potentially great shot if the light and payphone were shifted left or right. (I'd personally prefer right...) - Of course, rules are made to be broken, but this photo might benefit from that one. :-)

"golden christmas" is a fun shot.

"brody" is a darn cute dog...

I like the layout - Joe[y]'s lightwhitetwo is in the running for the template that I start editing off of when I move off the default template. I haven't compared them enough to know what you tweaked.

[subneural]

Originally Posted by se.nsuo.us

It would be easier for everyone if you gave a small list of tweaks you made

sorry for the late reply (working nights...). The minor tweaks are:

Adding navigation (prev, next) to the menu bar
Adding exif info below the photo
Removing the click-thru on current photo (normally linked to previous photo)
Added image_notes below the exif info.

[subneural]

Originally Posted by eon

I like the scene of this photo http://www.subneural.com/index.php?showimage=5

The photo would be better and more exciting if you place the subject out of the middle. (Is this sence correct English??)
More information about this read about the Golden ratio

Thanks! I would have liked to framed this shot differently. The only thing is, a very busy road runs along one side, and a highway runs along the other! In order to recompose, a lot more of modern society would have been visible!

I'm going to work on some interesting crops in photoshop to see what I can come up with :-)

Thanks everyone for your critiqes!